this my 2nd and 3rd

[simonmanu]

dont be harsh im new to photoshop rate 1 to 10

[darkphaux]

hmmm you need better text effects and you need to blend your renders, it looks like you just took the same backgroung and through some renders on it using a semi-defult text, 3/10

[Brad]

Exactly...2/10 they both look the same pretty much.

[darkphaux]

lol not even i could blend my renders :P

[simonmanu]

better???? i think so