My first time using adobe :S
 

Tell me what you guys think about this

just add some color, and that'd be great.

nice start man.

For your first time, that is really good.

The render is blended well, the font is readable, but like Randy said, it need color.

Yeah I like it alot. Add some color and your in buisiness

Thanks, the comments mean alot since this is my first. :D
I lost colour when i was fooling aruond with the brightness and contrast ( i was going through a grunge tut, didn't very much in text )

Looks more like you were messing with your Hue and Saturation levels. :\

Probably but then again i don't know what "saturation levels" are lol

Like randy said add some color and it would be awesome. :p